Here is Craig's brilliant story about the Nightmare Man. It could be great if you could leave a comment with some good feedback. What do you think is good about the story?
The Night I Caught the Nightmare Man
Night One
One night I was peacefully sleeping in my king
sized bed and I was all cozy in my bed. Suddenly I heard a sound under my bed
it was a dark creature with red bright eyes and it was staring at me. I was
scared! What was this creature why was it here?
Night Two
The next night
I was hiding under my covers waiting for the creature. Slowly the wardrobe door
creaked open. Quickly I turned on my torch and I shone it at the spooky
wardrobe. All of a sudden nightmare man was know more but dust! Luckily I could
sleep now. Is nightmare man dead or is he alive?
I think that Craig's story was excellent and he used some good vocabulary.
ReplyDeleteGood effert craige, excellent nightmare man story.so now I know what do when I see a nightmare man
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